After her There is no Love (Romantic story)

Subject: After her There is no Love (Romantic story) Wed Nov 20, 2013 10:53 pm

This story is written by me hope you like it

There was a beautiful girl called ' Victorian Lafourcade ' wide and noble family living in great luxury Palace called for Star French society's elegant and wonderful,
and in one of those concerts she met a young writer named ' Julian Posuje ' is a handsome, witty, lovable in social circles, but poor.
this young poor loved the rich girl, so he decided to ask her to marry him. ..
But she declined, preferring the young man from a rich family named ' raynal.
But after she married ' raynal ' she discovered that he has a rude thick heart, not unbearable and cruelty, so she haf a serious illness and she got sick and she developed all the signs of true death.
So They buried her in a common grave near From the village where she was born.
And when ' Julian ' knows the news of her death.
He Went to her grave, where he desire to retain their impact with something reminds him of all his life.

In the middle of the night after the place became abandoned he digged her tomb and took out her coffin then looked inside and cry.
And took a peice of her hair and touchs her face gently feeling so much sorrow.
And suddenly her eyelashes tremble then she opens her beautiful eyes .
' Julian ' panic.But discipline and soon he carried her with his hands .
And walked to his home.
And took care of her until she woked up.
As soon as he made sure she is okay
' Julian ' went to the cemetery before sunrise, and buried the empty casket,
so nobody knows what happened
' Victorian ' stayed at ' Julian ' several days till she retrieve her full healthy .
And with sincerity ' Julian ' rarely agreed to travel to America to start a new life.

Twenty years later they returned to Paris for a short vacation. And at a party, stood ' Victorian ' among the invited, and suddenly she freezed...she saw a man eyes starring at her..
It is the eyes of her Ex husband. .who came to her saying "you look like a lady I used to know"

And she thought that he doubted that she was his wife.
In The terrible shadow of silence ' raynal ' climbed by his eyes and stopped at her left arm.
her blood freezed as she remembered that he ejected her once with a piece of iron hit her arm this deeply and left a wounded after the full impact.

He shouted ': ' Victorian '!!! She did not find a way but to say the truth, and how the love of ' Julian ' saved her from death.

raynal was shocked but he understood how much they love each other..

So he divorced his wife so Julian can marry her

And finallyJulian and Victorian were married and they lived happly ever after

Hey, this is a nice story, reminds me of Romeo and Juliet though. I think you need to add some more verisimilitude into the story? It kinda rushes into things.

I did have some problems with a couple of sentances though...

Cleopatra wrote:: this young poor loved the rich girl, so he decided to ask her to marry him. ..

Maybe you could've wrote it like... this:

Anorak wrote:: The young man, struck with poverty wished to marry the rich, beatiful girl.

I understand that this is written in Arabic and translated, therefore of course there is going to be grammar mistakes, so I will let thoses pass.

Other than that, I liked it, can't wait to see more Very Happy

Thank you very much Anorak
I tried to translate as much as I can but there were somw words difficult for me so I used google translator
but I am glad you like it

No problem Cleopatra!

Thank you for your support

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