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 Like a teardrop in the wind

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Elowen Steren
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PostSubject: Like a teardrop in the wind Like a teardrop in the wind I_icon_minitimeTue Jan 28, 2014 10:26 am

I would recommend people who are sensitive, towards sad feelings not to read this. Read below if you understand.


Like a teardrop in the wind,
Silently falling to the ground.
I remember those big, blue, puppy eyes and how would you laugh when I smiled with delight.
Why are you so cold now?
Please don't leave, when there's no reason to.
Stay with me Darling, please.. do,
I cannot stand losing another beauty too.
I knew they were cruel,
I knew they were mean,
but I could have saved you Darling,
please.. wake up.
As I sit here till my own heart stops.
Angel, please, I beg you
Wake up.
Wake up for daddy, one last time,
Wake up and say.. I love you
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PostSubject: Re: Like a teardrop in the wind Like a teardrop in the wind I_icon_minitimeTue Jan 28, 2014 10:47 am

The... feels... beautiful! A poem of lost... it is sad but so accurate. I believe the child is in a coma yes?
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PostSubject: Re: Like a teardrop in the wind Like a teardrop in the wind I_icon_minitimeTue Jan 28, 2014 10:48 am

Yes, she's in coma, and of course she isn't going to survive~.
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PostSubject: Re: Like a teardrop in the wind Like a teardrop in the wind I_icon_minitimeTue Jan 28, 2014 11:07 am

XDD I thought that much
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PostSubject: Re: Like a teardrop in the wind Like a teardrop in the wind I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 08, 2014 12:03 am

Nice poem
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