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PostSubject: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeSun Sep 22, 2013 9:28 am

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This is my 'attempt' at poetry... Here we go...

With each step, I grow vain,
My rainbow unfolds in elegance.
I'm the symbol of pride and vanity!
Fanning my treasure in magnificence,
I am beauty in my surrounds,
My forest of brilliance and silkiness.
My call of distinction and pitch!
I am the touch of wonder,
Parading, as I show of my extended circular form.

Well, there's my poem...
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeSun Sep 22, 2013 9:53 am

Cool poem ˚_˚‖
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 23, 2013 1:06 am

Thank you XLR8
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 23, 2013 8:54 am

That wws amazing. Awesome work man
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 24, 2013 11:12 pm

I hear sarcasm....
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 24, 2013 11:56 pm

No sarcasm man. I am serious
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 24, 2013 11:57 pm

Like I said your works shows you should be in 8A, and this poem is yet another example of your work
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 12:22 am

Awww... Thanks
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 5:13 am

Smile
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 6:55 am

I don't like 8A though... I prefer 8B
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 11:31 am

Hmm weird whatever then your choicr
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 10:27 pm

Yeah, thanks though.
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 10:56 pm

It's all right
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 11:13 pm

I sent this poem off to a competition a little while ago... Mmm...
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 11:21 pm

Hope you win
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 25, 2013 11:23 pm

Er.. I already have won... Lol
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 26, 2013 6:44 am

Oh ok cool. Congrats then I guess lol
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PostSubject: Re: my poem thingy my poem thingy I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 28, 2013 3:17 am

Yeah, this poem is getting published in a book
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